Master's in Kinesiology (4.0 GPA) student teaches lower-level Kinesiology courses in Toronto

Shalom is very knowledgeable and excellent at finding the holes in your writing. Her experience as a masters student and TA has given her the skills to offer thoughtful feedback that amplifies your writing without taking away from your message or individuality. When I was preparing my personal statement for law school applications I knew that my writing was lacking something but I struggled to make effective edits. Shalom read over my statement multiple times picking out weak arguments, highlighting vague statements, and suggested stronger wording. She made my “okay”personal statement into a powerful and convincing piece of writing and I am so grateful for her insights. Thank you Shalom!!